Gah! Now we hit upon my major weakness, giving my stories a decent plot! I got the revamp up of the first part of my story, as all can see. Got some decent reading numbers now and one fave at least, so I take that as a positive turn. Much better response here than on FA where it has something like..6 reads. If this keeps up, I might just make the rest of the story a DA exclusive. Of course what to get Jayce into? I have learned that you can definitely over-think a story! Might tinker with the character aspect more before turning the new white lion loose totally. Might actually force myself to peek at some Jungle Emperor clips on the youtube or something for research purposes. Avoiding the end of course! I'd be bawling like a little kid. Yeah, my other weakness.